Article pretty good except for obvious mistakes you really need to get a reviewer. wikipedia article actually goes into more indepth and has lots more sources 46 of them! you need to do your research it is pathetic by compare. still i know you are just hobbies so cant expect a proffessional job.
Writing was o.k. excpet in parts, honestly Bill I think Matt is holding you back, I read along and then a real crap. after reading the story i know how to recognize it for what it is you need to go solo my friend.
all in all not bad for hobbies, though no offense i have read much better.
And so he tries another tactic, which is the " If you can't join them try to devide them and split them " - tactic
I wonder why Larry even bothers coming here and posting if he is so disappointed by the things we are doing.
So why bother Larry?
Article pretty good except for obvious mistakes you really need to get a reviewer. wikipedia article actually goes into more indepth and has lots more sources 46 of them! you need to do your research it is pathetic by compare. still i know you are just hobbies so cant expect a proffessional job.
Writing was o.k. excpet in parts, honestly Bill I think Matt is holding you back, I read along and then a real crap. after reading the story i know how to recognize it for what it is you need to go solo my friend.
all in all not bad for hobbies, though no offense i have read much better.
And so he tries another tactic, which is the " If you can't join them try to devide them and split them " - tactic
I wonder why Larry even bothers coming here and posting if he is so disappointed by the things we are doing.
So why bother Larry?
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