I've been looking at the website and trying to find the problematic areas, but it looks pretty good to me. I mean, for Pete's sake, it IS text adventure we're talking about, so I don't expect to see a slick flash animation or what have you. It's the text that should really sell the product.

One thing I did notice is that he likes to be very assertive when it comes to the games and his talents. I can't tell what is meant as humor or tongue-in-cheek. I saw the one with the pyramid and thought he was being funny there, rather like the humor in the Infocom games. It's hard to argue with all those testimonials, and I was surprised to see one from a "Will L.," which I have to wonder--is that you, Bill?